By the time I arrived at her
session ‘Writing Across the Tasman’, Tracy Farr had already dazzled me by following me on Twitter, but experiencing her insight in person was
even more impressive. Tracy was a warm presence, and discussed her experiences
of having a home in both Australia and New Zealand, and of the need for writers
to move away and return home. It made me think of the time when I’ll eventually
move away from home, and likely see my writing transform as I do, a collective idea
that brings a mixture of feelings.
Later,
Alexis Wright discussed the marginalisation of Indigenous Australians and how
her experiences as an Indigenous woman influenced the creation of her third
novel, The Swan Book. I was moved by
just how deeply Alexis cares not only for the state of her people but for the
fate of humanity as a whole. Alexis beautifully epitomised the crux of her
discussion with a sentence that asked us to consider how we treat other people
as well as ourselves: “You’ve got to be able to own your future.”
Sharon
Olds returned to the stage for an amusing, heart-warming and surprising
discussion with Peter Goldsworthy on writing life. She dropped perhaps one of
the most exciting things I’ve heard at the festival thus far with the
declaration that as a child she would have “give[n] up everything I’ve learned
to write my own poems”. Eileen Chong and Anthony Lawrence followed with Judith
Beveridge to share their experiences writing poetry. Eileen revealed how her
pieces ‘ferment’ from an image, memory or sound and she pens them only when
they are ready, while Anthony discussed his love of landscapes and how his
poems begin with an emotion he wishes to explore.
The day
ended with a ‘Writers' Welcome’, in which we students got the opportunity to
mingle with the writers and others involved in creating the festival at the Art
Vault. It was a fitting end to an endlessly entertaining day.
I can
honestly say that all of the writers I listened to were vastly different and
engaging people, and that every one of them that we’ve seen so far has opened
my eyes in a different way.
Punchy opening, but could be even punchier. Notice how a restructuring of the clauses in your opening sentence makes more impact Zach: "By the time I arrived at her session ‘Writing Across the Tasman’, Tracy Farr had already dazzled me by following me on Twitter, but experiencing her insight was even more impressive..."
ReplyDeleteIs it alright if I steal your idea for this opening? I hadn't even considered rearranging it, but your suggestion is brilliant!
DeleteI hope you don't mind hahahaha I went ahead and changed it to your suggestion! If you'd rather I change it back, just let me know and I'll happily oblige! :)
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